Tutorial? Hardly
1. There are far more informative tutorials out there
2. The colors in your "tutorial" clashed immensely and made it visually straining for the eyes
3. The effects were over the top in a bad way. Tutorials arent supposed to have text flying in and weird cursors. KEEP IT SIMPLE!
4. Do a goddamn spellcheck or something. FINISH isn't spelled FINNISH.
5. What the hell is with tutorials and ParagonX9?
6. If it's just a little quick thing you made for an assignment DONT SUBMIT IT TO NEWGROUNDS!! WE DON'T WANT IT!!
Try harder, give us something that's an actual tutorial
Preferably though, give up flash forever