I know it's gonna get through but I dont like it
I only gave this a 2 out of 5 when I voted because I know, sadly, that it will pass judgement. Don't get me wrong the art is good and stuff but the whole war thing has been done so much it's not even funny. Basically, this was a stickfight with better graphics. I've rarely seen a war flash where the author touches upon the emotional aspect to war, as opposed to the part where shit blows up, pardon my french. Alas, people shooting each other on a grassy meadow put to system of a down just... doesnt tickle my fancy. Try again, please do. Your character models werent half bad but try and add some tangible shred of plotline or underlying theme to it.
This is amazing for a first entry. I've never seen someone crank out something this good on their first try. Anydangway, on to buisness. The So-and-so vs so-and-so concept has been done to death, so the storyline, or lack thereof, was kinda lame. But I did like the mortal kombat bit. I'm looking forward to see what you can do when you get better at flash
Well, I know it's not gonna win any Oscars, but come on... This project was about the animation, anyway.
ROFL!!! That didnt make any freakin sense at all but that was one of the funniest flashes I've ever seen in my life. And the ending was my favorite, but I won't spoil all the candy sweet goodness for everybody else. Make more unicorn stuff I implore you!
1. There are far more informative tutorials out there
2. The colors in your "tutorial" clashed immensely and made it visually straining for the eyes
3. The effects were over the top in a bad way. Tutorials arent supposed to have text flying in and weird cursors. KEEP IT SIMPLE!
4. Do a goddamn spellcheck or something. FINISH isn't spelled FINNISH.
5. What the hell is with tutorials and ParagonX9?
6. If it's just a little quick thing you made for an assignment DONT SUBMIT IT TO NEWGROUNDS!! WE DON'T WANT IT!!
Try harder, give us something that's an actual tutorial
Preferably though, give up flash forever
well..... ive seen your animation and all you can seem to do is motion tweening so i suggest you learn some more effects by watching tutorials.....oh snap you just watches one.......13 yrs old you dont even know what you are talikng about.....go back to school ...! (i would suggest you give up flash forever m8) !!!
I found the easter egg, teehee
I wont reveal it though
Anyways, it was funny, I liked it
The reason I gave it a 5 for style was becase this concept's been overused so much, but it was still cool
WHY THE HELL WAS THE KEY IN HER!!
Why why why why why why
No offense, but It was bad
Oh well, at least you arent dead
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